I’ve just put the first three chapters, some 17K words, up on the authonomy site. For those who don’t know of it, it is a site run by Harper Collins where people display there novels for others to review and at the end of each month, HC takes the top 5 and sends them to an editorial board to review.
Which isn’t the real reason I put it up (though I wouldn’t say no if it ever came up.) It is more to get some feedback on what has been done to date.
Reading it on the site, as opposed to just in Word, is certainly a change. It almost appears decent, barring some typos and spelling errors that need fixing.
It can be seen at this page.
Mist and Shadows 