I have returned to my old familiar stomping grounds and gone back to work on the rewrite of Winter Wolves. It is the closest of any of my works to being completed, with a 20K synopsis finished and a previous rewrite started. After planning on rearranging the order of the first rewrite attempt, it got set aside for other projects, and that was hwen I really began to flounder about not getting anywhere.
The first three thousand words of the first chapter have gone through another rewrite, with a new introduction. I am putting this part up as an excerpt for people to read, and hopefully comment on. This certainly isn’t the final go over – its been fleshed out from the synopsis, but needs polishing still.
Mist and Shadows 