Posts Tagged ‘writing’

How long is a novel

Posted: December 21, 2008 in writing update
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I guess that is one of those question that, like how long is a piece of string, has no real answer, yet is a question many starting authors ask themselves. At least I know I have.

Looking around, the answer varies depending on who you ask. Some say 60-100,000 words, others 100-150,000. It also does vary between author and genre. Some tend to the shorter, while others, most especially fantasy, tend to the epic (in the truest sense of the word), clocking in at quarter of a million words or more, large enough to bludgeon someone to death with. Oft times a story could be told in 100,000 words yet still weigh in at 250,000, in book after book, reduced to a turgidity of shallow, endless characters and plots that no longer make sense, and the only reason they see light of day is to cash in on a name or because of contractual obligations (which, ironically, was the name of a Monty Python album), and should be allowed to die peacefully, but continue on and on, rather like this sentence.

For myself, I am often guilty of over planning things, to the point that they interfere in the doing of the plans. I like to work to a set target, of a set number of chapters. I have always had in mind a target of a prologue (though that is falling from favour) and twenty one chapters, each of around 3-5,000 words, preferably 4000, the chapters split into three parts, the start of the story, the middle of the story and the end of the story. A lot of advice I have seen is not to worry so much about the length, but just write until the story is done. My mind really doesn’t work that way. Hopefully that screwy brain-wiring won’t cause problems for me.

As reported earlier, the first day of the forth week was somewhat of a disaster, but since then things have picked up and I got back into the swing.

The beta draft of Winter Wolves is under way, fleshing out on the recently completed synopsis. The last four days saw around 10500 words done on it, up to part of the way through the third chapter. It will need a polish up once done, but I am happy with the way it is coming along, even with my normally fairly pessimistic outlook on my writing.

These last four weeks I have gone past 50,000 words written, which, when though about, is a decent amount. Almost a short novel in length, just not the composition.

Next week. As some may have noticed, next week is Christmas. This means my writing next week will be all but non-existent. Between last minute shopping and a few days up at my parents with the family I doubt I will have much time to write. I may print out what is done so far and review it while away, but that may be the limit of it.

I am almost certainly going to experience some form of withdrawal while away. I have noticed more of late an itch when I am not writing, a need to be writing, even when doing other things I normally enjoy – reading, watching movies, even playing games – and as a hardcore gamer that is saying something.

Huzzah!

Posted: December 16, 2008 in writing update
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After yesterdays meh day, today was much better, a truly huzzah day.  (You don’t see many people use huzzah anymore, but I like the word. Call me odd if you will.)

Got some solid writing done, clocking in at around 4100 words.  I may do some more later but right now I need a break.

Winter Wolves Prologue

Posted: December 16, 2008 in winter wolves
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After yesterday’s disappointment, I was able to sit down and get some solid writing in in the morning.  So much so that I was able to finish the first beta draft of the prologue.  At some stage I will go back over for the polish, but it’ll do for now as I push on into chapter one.

At this stage I thought I’d put it out there for people to have a look at, and comment if they have the time.  Be interesting to know wether it needs a little polsihing, a lot of polishing or just to be thrown out.

Winter Wolves Prologue

Meh

Posted: December 16, 2008 in writing update
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If I could some up yesterday in one word, it would be meh.  As a day for writing, it was pretty much a disaster.  I probably managed a mere one hundred words, the first day since I started that I have failed to make progress.

I had planned to do plenty of writing, but it never panned out.  Had a few chores to do, then got side-tracked by other things that should never have done so.  Following that I spent half the day with a massive headache and finally had togo out in the evening to meet some mates.

Today will hopefully be better.  The beta draft of Winter Wolves needs to be started.  The plan is to take the 20K alpha draft and expand it to around four times length, then go back over it for a final polish.

And so ends the third week and the fourth week looms upon us, fresh and uncharted.

But first, the news.

The main is, of course, that the alpha draft/synopsis of ‘Winter Wolves’ has been completed.  It is good to have completed it and ready to engage the next phase.

In addition, the serial story Cara’s Choice has started and been updated four times this last week, though will return to a more regular schedule now, and The Bronze Man has been further added to.   I am about half way through The Bronze Man so the complete (if unpolished) version should be entirely up in a couple of weeks.

At a rough estimate, this was another week of around 13K words. Still lower than I would have liked, but consistent. It makes in the last three weeks a total of around 40K words written, which is more than I have written in a long time.

And now, onwards to week four.

Not alone

Posted: December 13, 2008 in General
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As I mentioned in an earlier post I have a habit of starting new projects before completing old ones and am always coming up with new ideas.

As it turns out I am not alone in this. Jen Haley, in her post here mentions that similar happens to her, and in the comments others say the same.

It is reassuring to find out that this happens to others as well.

A new part has been added to The Bronze Man short story as part of Short Story Friday.

In the new part Awn the Red and the Chelosian Kiriastas engage in their challenge, as well as dealing with the aftermath of the fight.

The story should continue again next Friday, so tune in then for more.

After the struggle of the last short while, I finally punched through the wall and reached a significant milestone.

The alpha draft/synopsis of ‘Winter Wolves’ is complete, and it feels good.  It only comes in at around 19,400 words, done in around two weeks of writing, but it isn’t meant to be full length – it is just the outline.

Next step is to go back over it, line by line, chapter by chapter, and flesh it out.  As it stands now many of the descriptions are fairly basic.  It may read something along the lines of;

The sun rose and a breeze blew through the trees.  A man rode down the hill, following the path into the village.

As I said, just a basic outline of what happens.  Lines like that will get reworked to be much more descriptive, worthy of being in a story.

Also many of the characters are fairly basic, with no descriptions, and instead are just names. Some aren’t even that, being known by titles until I can give them appropriate names.

There are times when characters also disappear for no reason and crop up again later for no other reason I had forgotten they were there and it becomes blindingly obvious later on when they appear again later on with no explanations as to where they had been.

I may end up printing out what is done to date and make annotations as I read through it about things that need fixing.

15K

Posted: December 10, 2008 in writing update
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Finally hit 15K on the alpha draft of Winter Wolves, and for some reason it has been a struggle.  It has taken 5 days to do 5K words.

Still, the end of this phase is in sight.  I’m up to chapter 15 of around 20 and should finish the draft/synopsis in around another 5K words.

Once that is done the real hard work begins – fleshing it all out.